Week [4] of June Holidays.
"Great! Look what you've done" Pete hissed.
Still in shock, and soaked wet, Frank couldn't move. The gate opposite opened.
A tall bald man in a black T-shirt ran out and saw Josh.
"You little rascal!" he shouted.
Josh suddenly recalled Miss Amy's face as she said, I have no choice but to suspend you if your poor behaviour continues.
"I'll be calling your father later," warned the bald man. Josh recognized him as one of his Dad's workmates.
Josh felt depressed. He shrugged off his worries about school and the accident and returned home.
posted by Alfie @ 1:39 AM
5 Comments:
nice stories. its just like reading a storybook. keep it up
hihi thanks for commenting at my blog!i have read your entry and it makes me want to read on and know more.a good writing technique.
lols nice blog. jiayoouu
goooood grasp of english here.
Good job thats why ur called alfie!!!!!!!!!!!
hey!:)its great dat you have para but sometimes it get abit irritatin,sorey arhs.but maybe you shld try having longer paras.it is great that you go to a next para when another character is speakin though:)jiayou!!
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